Sunday, July 8, 2007

This is what I think of the Philippine Politics. The Philippine Politics isn't as great as before. It's so corrupt. There are still some "good" politicians but they are so few. They are not enough in number to make this country into a new and improved Philippines. The Philippines is a really nice country. It's just that the people who are running it are sometimes drawn to temptations. If the people would just unite to make this country better, we would be on top. The citizens are also at fault. If they chose wisely to whom their votes should go to, the Philippine Politics and economy would be better than this.

1 comment:

ygy said...

It’s ALMOST perfect! Just one little snag:
“If they chose wisely to whom their votes should go to, the Philippine Politics and economy would be better than this.” -> This sentence apperas redundant. You used "to" twice. :-D You can still rephrase this in a way that you don't even have to use "to."